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I thought this LinkedIn post was gonna go viral
It flopped. Twice 🫠 And I think I know why...
I thought this LinkedIn post was gonna go viral…
Then it flopped – twice 🫠
Which was a real kick in the nuts, since the same content crushed when I posted it in TOFU.
Turns out simple > clever on LinkedIn.
So here’s what I do differently now…
Okay, hold up.
I sound like a bit of a dick saying I expected one of my LinkedIn posts to go viral, right?
But here’s why:
Last January, I posted a deep dive here in TOFU that went down really.
Like, really well:

Here was the hook, btw:
Do your clients treat you like two-ply toilet paper?
A commodity they just want for the lowest price.
Then grab a needle and some thread.
Cause your gonna want to cross stitch this into a pillow and rest your weary head on it every night:
✨ Be an investment, not an expense ✨
So I’m buzzing, obviously.
And I’m thinking “ooohhhh baby, this is gonna do gangbusters on LinkedIn!”
So I post it.
And I wait for the 👏s and 💡s to start rolling in.
And I wait…

And lemme tell ya TOFU:
I’m still waiting 💀

The mortifying part?
I was like “nah this is 🔥, I must’ve just posted it at the wrong time of day or something”
So I added an image and posted the same thing again a couple months later…
And it flopped AGAIN 🫠

I thought I’d done everything right:
Banger hook (lads, someone literally told me “you’re not gonna be able to top those four lines this year” 💀)
A post that (IMHO) added value
Ego-baiting someone with tonnes of followers (Austin was having none of it 😂)
An incredible image on the second one (graphic design is, after all, my passion)
And yet these are two of my lowest ever performing LinkedIn posts?
A year’s worth of posts later, I think I know why:
Simple beats clever every time on LinkedIn
Check it out.
Simple:

Clever:

And it makes sense.
When I’m scrolling my feed, I’m scanning every post through the filter:
“Is this relevant to me?”
So the hooks that tell me exactly what the post is about win.
Which is where I went wrong with my “Do your clients treat you like two-play toilet paper?” hook.
Clever, but not exactly clear.
I course corrected with these posts:

Kinda boring? Yup.
But I’ve learned it’s worth saving the clever stuff for after you’ve hooked your reader.
Or else you’ll find yourself with a lot fewer readers 🤷
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